There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The current Personality section is much too short. We'd like to see the major points of Leon's personality fleshed out with more in-game references to support them. It also reads a bit too superficial level, so delving more into the why and how it affects his character will help.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is January 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
The current Personality section is much too short. We'd like to see the major points of Leon's personality fleshed out with more in-game references to support them. It also reads a bit too superficial level, so delving more into the why and how it affects his character will help.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is January 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!