There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
In the Personality section, while the answers provided are a good length, they don't provide much information about Chopper beyond a surface level. How did the two doctors influence Chopper? Why does he admire pirates? How have the Straw Hats influenced him further? What regrets does he have, and how have they shaped him? Answering these questions and expanding other points you think could help give a better impression of Chopper will help.
In addition, we did notice the short length of the sample tags. We recognize these are from the October TDM which is perfectly fine, but we needed to point it out. We also need to point out that the threads would not carry over since they were from a previous TDM.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is January 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
In the Personality section, while the answers provided are a good length, they don't provide much information about Chopper beyond a surface level. How did the two doctors influence Chopper? Why does he admire pirates? How have the Straw Hats influenced him further? What regrets does he have, and how have they shaped him? Answering these questions and expanding other points you think could help give a better impression of Chopper will help.
In addition, we did notice the short length of the sample tags. We recognize these are from the October TDM which is perfectly fine, but we needed to point it out. We also need to point out that the threads would not carry over since they were from a previous TDM.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is January 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!