There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
In the Personality section, while you gave a first impression of Faris on his appearance, you didn't delve how he portrays himself as part of his personality. Please expand on this question to focus more on how he presents his character and personality to others and how that would affect how others perceive him.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is September 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
In the Personality section, while you gave a first impression of Faris on his appearance, you didn't delve how he portrays himself as part of his personality. Please expand on this question to focus more on how he presents his character and personality to others and how that would affect how others perceive him.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is September 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!