There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
While the basic elements of Sora's personaity were touched on, the personality section is much too short.
Please elaborate on various points such as how Riku and Kairi or other friends affect Sora's motivations and goals. Examples as to how Sora can empathize with anyone including friends and villains and how he perceives redeeming villains. Please touch on Sora’s recklessness and self-sacrificing attitude and how that effects Sora’s self-worth and how that ties into Sora’s flaws and regrets. Also any notes or examples about Sora’s stubborn attitude or any rage or negative emotions he has now and how he deals with them or how those traits might change anyone's first impressions of Sora.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
While the basic elements of Sora's personaity were touched on, the personality section is much too short.
Please elaborate on various points such as how Riku and Kairi or other friends affect Sora's motivations and goals. Examples as to how Sora can empathize with anyone including friends and villains and how he perceives redeeming villains. Please touch on Sora’s recklessness and self-sacrificing attitude and how that effects Sora’s self-worth and how that ties into Sora’s flaws and regrets. Also any notes or examples about Sora’s stubborn attitude or any rage or negative emotions he has now and how he deals with them or how those traits might change anyone's first impressions of Sora.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!