There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
While this app does a better job at elaborating and providing canon examples, we could use a bit more detail. Does Eda rebel against the Emperor solely for her own sake, or for those of her loved ones? How else has Eda's curse affected her relationships with her loved ones, like Raine, Luz, King, and Lilith? How does she show tough love to the people around her?
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REVISION
While this app does a better job at elaborating and providing canon examples, we could use a bit more detail. Does Eda rebel against the Emperor solely for her own sake, or for those of her loved ones? How else has Eda's curse affected her relationships with her loved ones, like Raine, Luz, King, and Lilith? How does she show tough love to the people around her?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!