There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
The app seems surface level and glosses over many important details. What are some ways her personality affects her interactions with others? How did the death of her village affect her, or her arrival at the Manor, or becoming a Hunter? How has Jack influenced her?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
The app seems surface level and glosses over many important details. What are some ways her personality affects her interactions with others? How did the death of her village affect her, or her arrival at the Manor, or becoming a Hunter? How has Jack influenced her?
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!