There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
While the basic elements of Oogway's character are touched on, we could use more elaboration. For example, how does Oogway's character show past the surface level, and what are some canon examples of it. How does he show kindness, and how has his observer's approach to the world hurt those around him? Also, please limit the number of gifs used in the whole app to just one.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
While the basic elements of Oogway's character are touched on, we could use more elaboration. For example, how does Oogway's character show past the surface level, and what are some canon examples of it. How does he show kindness, and how has his observer's approach to the world hurt those around him? Also, please limit the number of gifs used in the whole app to just one.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is March 10th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!