There are a few things that either didn't quite meet our standards, were lacking, or incorrect. Fortunately we feel that this can be easily revised. Here are our concerns:
Please tell us a little more about the how and why the darkness got to Terra and why it made him fail his test. Let us know about his insecurities, his frustrations and weaknesses and why the darkness effects him in the way that it does.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one; do not edit your original app. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is May 9th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!
REVISION
Please tell us a little more about the how and why the darkness got to Terra and why it made him fail his test. Let us know about his insecurities, his frustrations and weaknesses and why the darkness effects him in the way that it does.
Please submit your revisions as its own comment in reply to this one; do not edit your original app. You have five (5) days to submit the revisions, otherwise we will consider it a revocation of your application. The deadline is May 9th, 11:59PM US Eastern Time. If you have any questions or concerns, ask away!